This article lacks an extensive amount of detail and information on the actual incident. It repeats information such as the fleeing of the "driver of a BMW and a passenger", bringing them up twice, and also supplying minimal information on the original owner of the car. The only solid details that are given, and actually pertain to the case is in the middle, describing the accident and how the scene was found. The article is concluded with "fluff", giving background on the couple, statistical facts about Orthodox Jewish in New York, finally ends with details on their funeral. This article requires more information on the accident, however, the author lengthens his article with supplementary details.
http://www.nytimes.com/aponline/2013/03/04/us/ap-us-expectant-parents-killed.html?hp&_r=0
http://www.nytimes.com/aponline/2013/03/04/us/ap-us-expectant-parents-killed.html?hp&_r=0
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